Leave it all on the floor Chapter 16 - teaser

Thursday, December 23

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Okay so here's a little taste from Chapter 16 of my story Leave it all on the Floor:

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“Tell me something?” Edward asked as he took a drink from his glass.

“What?” Bella asked taking her own bite of tortilla chip and salsa.

“What you were like as a kid?”

“What do you mean?”

“I mean…I know how passionate you are about dancing and that it started when you were young, but what else did you do? Where you into sports?”

Bella barked out a laugh, “No. Sports aren’t really my thing. I mean I grew up in a house with just my dad so I get the ideals, I can watch football and yell at the screen as well as anyone,” she pumped her fist in the air half heartedly and Edward couldn’t help but laugh with her. After their laughter died down she continued. but other than that…I didn’t do much other than dance really. It was my life, where I was able to find my center. Life made sense there, on the dance floor. I didn’t feel out of place or so alone when I was dancing.” Bella cleared her throat before continuing. “If I was dancing I was studding. I had to keep my grades up after all. That was a stipulation from my dad. We both knew that I wanted to dance but we didn’t want that to be my only option. I was actually on my way to being valedictorian when I was accepted into the ABA.”

“That doesn’t really surprise me much Swan,” Edward said with a small smirk before firing another question my way. “What’s one of your favorite memories from childhood that doesn‘t involve dance?”

“Okay I’ll tell one but you have to go next,” Bella smiled as she took another bite from her chip.

“That’s fair enough,” Edward conceded.

She absently twirled a chip in the salsa bowl as she began, “I was probably about eight or nine years old and my dad was off of work and he was going to go down to the lake and go fishing with one of his friends and his son and for some odd reason I got it my head that I wanted to join them. Seth and I were fine in the beginning, really were excited to see each other. It’d been a while with my Ballet lessons and the separations in our schools. It was getting to us.” Bella brought the now slightly soggy chip up to her mouth and ate it. She sighed and continued her story. “After a while though the excitement wore off and we quickly became quite useless, and more than a little whinny. Seth had said something that had upset me. I don’t even remember what it was now, but it really aggravated me.” Bella chuckled already knowing where the story was going. “I shoved him and well…needless to say sleepy children do not equal good balance and we ended up turning the boat over.” Bella and Edward were both laughing now. “I still remember my dad‘s when it happened. It was a strange mixture between anger and surprise.”

“How did you manage to overturn the boat?” Edward asked still laughing.

“Well I shoved Seth and he rocked a little too far and fell over the side. His dad reached to grab him and the mixture of the sudden shift on that side caused the little fishing boat we were in to flip. Luckly we weren’t that far away from the shore when it happened but it certainly ended our trip early and that was the last time our dads took us fishing, we always had to stay back with Seth‘s mom after that.”

“So fishing isn’t your sport either?”

“No. Not at all,” Bella answered with another chuckle. She swiped another chip from the basket. She smiled as she looked out onto the dance floor.

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Okay...i underestimated.

Thursday, December 2

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Okay so i know i'd said that this month i'd start a weekly fic review...well...my life is all sorts of crazy right now so i'm afraid that has been pushed back and with the contest entry time coming up i'm thinking it might be best just to start them after all of that since it's sure to leave me slightly frazzled. I know that I'm not really great at this blogger thing, but it's a learning process and I don't know if any of you know this but College kind of sucks and takes up way too much time. :-) I just wanted to make sure ya'll didn't think i completely forgot, I didn't it's just too crazy to set time aside to do something like that right now. I might change my mind after finals, but i'll keep you updated.

So apparently i'm a jack ass.

Sunday, November 28

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okay i know i promised you a story review and i'll get one up by next week, but the holidays have been crazier than i thought they were going to be. Still I've found some time to read over some of the stories i was going to review. I am a member of always send a review after i finish reading a new chapter, because i know how much i like to get reviews. Well apparently the review i sent upset the writer, which was never my intention. I got this huge review response and I've become a topic on the forum i used to frequent...that's right used to. I didn't mean anything by my review, only to give my honest opinion on the chapter, which as a whole i really loved. My only beef was that Bella had taken Edward back too quickly. Apparently i'm just not mature enough to understand Bella's position. Well that may be, but i'm sorry, if i were in a relationship of ANY kind with someone and they just dropped off the face of the planet i wouldn't just take them back into my life with open arms. Would you? I would make them sweat it for a little while. If that makes me an immature vindictive ass then so be it

I just don't understand the response to my review. I mean it's one thing to give me the long angry review response privately, but to post said review response along with more information on how wrong i was on the forum takes mean to another level. What's really the point other than to humiliate me and make me feel like a huge jack ass for giving my opinion? I don't care how many readers you have, or how many reviews you get per chapter, it does not give you the right belittle ANYONE.

Now I need a hug... :-( so much for my happy mellow holiday.

Coming Soon

Tuesday, November 23

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Okay so everyone knows that the holidays are coming up right? And if you live in the USA like i do we have two, one this week. So that leaves me with some time on my hands which is good because i'm feeling incredibly behind on EVERYTHING. The submission date is fast approaching for our contest and i have no idea how many if any entries we're going to receive. I feel like I've done as much pimping out as i possibly can, but i still don't feel like it's enough. On top of all that my stories kind of fell by the wayside while i was focusing on getting the contest running and I'm afraid my readers are going to want to come after me with torches and pitchforks if I put them off for much longer. So this is what I'm going to do. I already have one chapter of one story written and I'm going to try to post it either later today or tomorrow. Friday I am going to knuckle down and write the last chapter of my other story, and work on the one i have coming up for the holidays. On top of that I am going to start something new here on the blog. Every week I will review a story that I've been obsessing over, or at least absolutely love. I'm not sure i can get it up by tomorrow, because i have a thanksgiving dinner to prepare so all except the first will be on Wednesday and will be called "Hump-day word reviews". I'm super excited to see how this turns out.

Holy Crap!

Friday, November 12

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Wow...okay so *waves to new follower* yes we are small but mighty right? Thank you for following me and joining me on this crazy journey I'm sure to take us all on.

So to the name sake of this post. Right now my life is a whole bunch of crazy. I'm writing four stories at the same time. Three full length and one O/S, don't ask me why i thought that was a good idea...I wasn't going to do the O/S but it's for a good cause. I'm writing it for Fans Against Domestic Violence, which is a really good thing so i figured i could carve some time out of my day. I'm about half way through it and it's due by the end of the month...sigh...

I'm trying to also get involved in Lady Tazz's new blog Fandom Spotlight, which is a blog that focuses on the positive things in the fandom, which i don't think is done enough. On top of all that lets add the contest that i'm working on. I looked at the stats for the contest page and holy crap we've breached the 200 mark. How insane is that? I never in 100 years thought there'd be this sort of response. Now the closer we're getting to the deadline the more i'm feeling overwhelmed. After all there are only two of us hosting the contest, and we have to wade through all of the entries ourselves...how are we possibly going to do that? Then again just because that many people viewed the page, doesn't mean we'll get that many entries, right?

In other news. I've been a writing machine lately. I'm hoping to get the next chapter of Leave it all on the Floor up by this afternoon. If i don't get it posted then I at least want to get a teaser up. I'm working on the last chapter of Love in Music but it's slow going. I'm really finding the wedding hard to write, so i might have to scrap what i have and try something different. Well until next time then...

It's come to my attention

Monday, November 8

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Okay so it's come to my attention that i have offended a number of people with some of the wording in the contest rules. Let me start by saying a heartfelt I'm sorry. It was never my intention to offend anyone. When i received the e-mail i was slightly shocked that something had been said to anger someone so much. I have subsequently fixed the problem, but i can't shake that shitty feeling that i have right now. It sucks. I feel the need to purge so here it is.

This had to deal with the slash stipulation of the contest. Okay let me just say this now! I MEANT NO DISRESPECT! At all. I know it sounds sort of trite to say now, but one of my best friends in the entire world is gay! I'm in no position myself to judge anyone about anything. All that beings said i feel the need to explain why the stipulation is there to begin with.

The no slash is just basically because I, as a reader, personally don't like to read slash fanfiction. And as one of the two judges for this contest i must read every entry that comes in. I can't say much else to defend it except to say that it's a preference, and i know i'm not alone out there. I'm sorry that's just how it is. When you write something like that you take that risk.

Other than that I'm very happy to see that i'm no longer talking to only myself! *waves to new follower* yes it's singular...but i still welcome you whole heartedly.

Contests

Tuesday, October 26

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Okay so I entered a contest and came in second...I was a little disapointed about it because I put so much into it, and then it feels like all that work didn't pay off. I know that i sound like a spoiled brat but i'm not going to sit here and lie to you and tell you i was happy about not getting first. I endeavor to be honest. However I came out of the contest with a new fervor. I wanted to do my own contest but i couldn't get the support for it rounded up so it's on hold for a while however, i was trolling the forums one day and found someone looking for help for their contest and i responded. I mean i didn't want to just ignore them like people had ignored my request. So right now I'm working on a page for the contest on here...it's called Twisted Twilight Tales. It's a O/S contest that bases the stories loosely on some of our favorite Fairy tales. More to come soon on that front. Right now i'm headed to work on the page. I'll try to do another post later...